Thursday, 1 September 2016

Writing With Troy Portfolio Post

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In Troy's writing group we watched a video about a tennis ball making factory in bangkok. the words I wanted to use are bird, PVA glue which got off troy but the others I thought up myself. Those others were coke, cans, shaping, organisasion, green and huge. I hope that you enjoy reading my story. Here is the link to the video.
http://thekidshouldseethis.com/post/how-to-make-a-tennis-ball

   





Evaluation: this was hard to do but if you think you can do something then you have a better chance then people that don't believe in them selves.

feedback feedfoward:I really like your post but next time maybe take your time spelling
Eli












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