Wednesday, 21 September 2016

E T Reo

For the last 2 Monday's me and Sam Ross have been making this video. The video is based on our whakatouki "Whia Te Ito kahurangi, ki Te tuoho koe, me he mauga teitei." Hope you like our video. If you do please leave a comment below. Thank you.

Wednesday, 14 September 2016

Book Buddies Portfolio Post

Description:
Book buddies is a programme that was set up about 5/6 weeks ago. To get our book buddy we had to fill in a survey about our reading ability. My buddy is Jack Wilson, we are reading Bear Grylls Rage Of The Rhino and what we do is decide where to read each week or each day and then read to that part of the book. Here is our slide about what we have and don't be fooled, it is really hard. Feedback: Is your book buddy from your class? Same grade? Maybe tell me a bit more about what the goal of book buddies is. Mum
Feedfoward: Next time, maybe explain book buddies a bit more before telling us about your book and buddy. Mum

Evaluation:
This programme is a good and hard way to get us reading more and I would change for any reading programme in the world. Sam

Tuesday, 13 September 2016

Art Portfolio Post

Description
Nic and Troy's classes we have been working through a processes of making a self portrait. I have a slide of the processes. The art is for our Calender art and Ellys class are making some Olympic art. Here is my slide and it has my art in it. 

Feedback:I like your art and it looks like you and your hairstyle is the the same as yours in real life. Shrawan
Feedfoward :Maybe you should write a bigger description so people know about your art. Shrawan

Thursday, 1 September 2016

Writing With Troy Portfolio Post

Description:
In Troy's writing group we watched a video about a tennis ball making factory in bangkok. the words I wanted to use are bird, PVA glue which got off troy but the others I thought up myself. Those others were coke, cans, shaping, organisasion, green and huge. I hope that you enjoy reading my story. Here is the link to the video.
http://thekidshouldseethis.com/post/how-to-make-a-tennis-ball

   





Evaluation: this was hard to do but if you think you can do something then you have a better chance then people that don't believe in them selves.

feedback feedfoward:I really like your post but next time maybe take your time spelling
Eli












Writing With Troy Portfolio Post

Description:
In troys writing group we watched a video about a tennis ball making factory in bangkok. the words I wanted to use are bird, PVA glue which got off troy but the others I thought up myself. Those others were coke, cans, shaping, organisasion, green and huge. I hope that you enjoy reading my story. Here is the link to the video.
http://thekidshouldseethis.com/post/how-to-make-a-tennis-ball

   





Evaluation: this was hard to do but if you think you can do something then you have a better chance then people that don't believe in them selves.

feedback feedfoward:I really like your post but next time maybe take your time spelling
Eli